Thursday, September 5, 2013

My Name

                                                       Bryan



   Strong, honorable, strength, , and force,
This is my name.
This is showing everybody my qualities.
This is me.

I am Bryan.

My name originated from Gaelic,
I am Irish , German , and other cultures,
I do own a major anger problem, 
But I can control me anger well.

I like to believe that my anger problem has a name, 
I call him León.

I am gentle to others ,only if they are respectful and nice to me,
But when I am treated like dirt and with disrespect , I can be hostile.

I have a strong will , 
Because of this I am hard to convince,
 I am stubborn, 
I do not like to listen to other's advice.

The explanation of my name explains me completely,
Yet I find my self in disbelief .

I am in disbelief ,
Because of my name explaining that,
My instinct is to follow others.
I strongly disagree for that,
Because I like to be alone or be the leader, not a follower.

I strongly agree on some things about my name for example,
I find the most contentment when I provide well for my family,
and when I protect them from harm.

This is me and my name,
Should you learn of me,
 I hope,
Should you fear me,
No, but if you anger me you should.

From me to whoever is reading this,
I say farewell.

                                                                                                      - Bryan Taborn

18 comments:

  1. It was really deep and I agree with you. Some of the stuff does describe you well! Very good job :)

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  2. I like how truthful you were in your poem. I also liked the way in which you didn't agree with what others defined your name as, most people wouldn't have done that.

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  3. Bryan, great job. I love your honesty and openness in your writing. Keep that anger under control, buddy.

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  4. Very well written I like how you put your feeling into and how realistic it was.

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  5. Good job Bryan I really loved your poem! The words you used really stuck out and had good meaning :) good job!

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  6. This poem was an amazing work. I enjoyed every second.

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  7. I like that you said "protect my family from harm"

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  8. Very good

    I liked how it was written

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  9. It was very good. You used intelligent words :). You were very honest in your poem.

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  10. I loved your poem! Well thought out and I loved how you talked about the root of your name!! Nicely put Bryan!! Woo!! :D

    -Jessi :D

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  11. I thought it was very informative and well written. You gave all the information about your name which I loved. Giving your anger a name was also something I liked, very meaningful and deep.

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  12. Very well written. Written with feeling. Good job (:

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  13. I thought it was very nice. My favorite part was when you gave your anger problem a name. Very poetic.

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  14. Very well written & I like how it was very honest .

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