Bryan
Strong, honorable, strength, , and force,
This is my name.
This is showing everybody my qualities.
This is me.
I am Bryan.
My name originated from Gaelic,
I am Irish , German , and other cultures,
I do own a major anger problem,
But I can control me anger well.
I like to believe that my anger problem has a name,
I call him León.
I am gentle to others ,only if they are respectful and nice to me,
But when I am treated like dirt and with disrespect , I can be hostile.
I have a strong will ,
Because of this I am hard to convince,
I am stubborn,
I do not like to listen to other's advice.
The explanation of my name explains me completely,
Yet I find my self in disbelief .
I am in disbelief ,
Because of my name explaining that,
My instinct is to follow others.
I strongly disagree for that,
Because I like to be alone or be the leader, not a follower.
I strongly agree on some things about my name for example,
I find the most contentment when I provide well for my family,
and when I protect them from harm.
This is me and my name,
Should you learn of me,
I hope,
Should you fear me,
No, but if you anger me you should.
From me to whoever is reading this,
I say farewell.
- Bryan Taborn
I strongly disagree for that,
Because I like to be alone or be the leader, not a follower.
I strongly agree on some things about my name for example,
I find the most contentment when I provide well for my family,
and when I protect them from harm.
This is me and my name,
Should you learn of me,
I hope,
Should you fear me,
No, but if you anger me you should.
From me to whoever is reading this,
I say farewell.
- Bryan Taborn
It was really deep and I agree with you. Some of the stuff does describe you well! Very good job :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome job!!!!^_^
ReplyDeleteFunny guy!
DeleteThat was deep, good job (:
ReplyDeleteI like how truthful you were in your poem. I also liked the way in which you didn't agree with what others defined your name as, most people wouldn't have done that.
ReplyDeleteBryan, great job. I love your honesty and openness in your writing. Keep that anger under control, buddy.
ReplyDeleteVery well written I like how you put your feeling into and how realistic it was.
ReplyDeleteGood job Bryan I really loved your poem! The words you used really stuck out and had good meaning :) good job!
ReplyDeleteThis poem was an amazing work. I enjoyed every second.
ReplyDeleteI like that you said "protect my family from harm"
ReplyDeleteVery good
ReplyDeleteI liked how it was written
It was very good. You used intelligent words :). You were very honest in your poem.
ReplyDeleteI loved your poem! Well thought out and I loved how you talked about the root of your name!! Nicely put Bryan!! Woo!! :D
ReplyDelete-Jessi :D
I thought it was very informative and well written. You gave all the information about your name which I loved. Giving your anger a name was also something I liked, very meaningful and deep.
ReplyDeleteGood job Bryan
ReplyDeleteVery well written. Written with feeling. Good job (:
ReplyDeleteI thought it was very nice. My favorite part was when you gave your anger problem a name. Very poetic.
ReplyDeleteVery well written & I like how it was very honest .
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